Historical Novel Book Fair

Francine Howarth has kindly invited me and many others to take part in her historical novel book fair, so here goes with a plug for The Monmouth Summer, a book set in 1685 which follows the tragic adventures of Ann Carter, a young girl torn between her love for Robert Pole, an officer in King James’s army far above her social station, and her duty to marry her childhood sweetheart Tom Goodchild, a village shoemaker who is, well – the right choice, but not the romantic one! So, as you see, a classic love triangle – but the tragedy comes in when Ann, together with her two young lovers, her father and all the men of her Devonshire village, is swept up into a rebellion led by James Scott, Duke of Monmouth, King Charles II’s bastard son, who is determined to drive his uncle from the throne. Love tragedy and romance, all combined.

The story starts with an illicit tryst between Ann and her lover Robert on a hill outside Colyton dreaming of a forbidden future. Now read on . . .

The Monmouth Summer 


“LET ME loosen it.”

“No, Rob. I…” She turned her head slightly but his hand followed, touching her cheek and the ribbons of her white bonnet.

“It’s a warm day, you know. Let the breeze cool you.”

The girl sat on the grass at the top of the hayfield, her back arched, her head thrown back slightly to catch the soft summer breeze. The young man knelt beside her, caressing the neck which her posture showed to such advantage. The horses which had brought them here – a dark bay hunter and a chestnut pony – grazed peacefully behind them, near the wood which, the young lovers hoped, shielded them from prying eyes.

His fingers began to undo the ribbons below her chin. The fingers were careful, rather awkward with the knot, and as she sat still letting him do it Ann felt the blood rush into her face. I am a fool, she thought, I am being used. Then the ribbons came free and Robert smiled at her, his lean freckled face a few inches from hers. The corners of his brown eyes crinkled with amusement.

“So now … what do we see?” He lifted the bonnet off her head and embarrassment overcame her. Not being a girl who spent hours dressing, that morning she had simply wound her hair loosely round her head, pushed a pin through it, and tied the bonnet on top. She lifted her hands and felt loose wisps of hair everywhere.

“No. Let me.” He reached out a hand, to help.

“‘Tis all right.” She ducked out of his reach. “There’s a pin, here … somewhere.” She found it, pulled it out, and felt the long thick auburn locks tumble around her shoulders. She shook them free, combed them roughly straight with her fingers, and looked back at him, half-amused, half-ashamed.

“So. This is the real Ann Carter. A model of high fashion indeed!” He lifted a long tress and let the breeze blow it back. “Do I embarrass you? I’m sorry. It’s beautiful, Ann – you should always wear it like this!”

“So you could laugh at me.”

“No. Not laugh at you. Never. It’s more that I mock myself, for being unworthy. Ann, when I am with you, you seem so good, so beautiful, I feel sometimes I have died, and am in Heaven with the angels.”

She knew his words were blasphemous as well as foolish. Courtier’s words, nonsense – the sort of talk that charmed and frightened her at the same time. No-one in her family would speak like that. But then, that was the thrill of being with him: to dare to play foolish, dangerous games, to say things that should not be said. To let him loosen her hair, call her an angel.

“And then, to prove it is not so … ” He bent forward and kissed her. It was the first time that day; in fact, only the fifth time ever. For a moment she responded, just her lips touching his; then, as his arm reached round her waist, she twisted away swiftly and firmly before any more could come of it.

“If we are in Heaven, Rob, then we must behave like the angels. Sit here beside me and listen to the heavenly music – of the larks, up above us, there!”

He sat down and she leant back against him, partly to avoid the kiss. But his arm came around her, brushing her breast, and they both thrilled to the unacknowledged touch. For a while they said nothing, listening to the larksong overhead, and the sound of their horses grazing nearby. Ann’s bonnet lay on the grass beside them, and the sinful breeze blew freely through her hair.


Find this book on Amazon UK or Amazon US.

And here is a post about how I came to write such a book.

A Dramatic Evening

It was because of a play that I wrote The Monmouth Summer. Not a famous play in a West End theatre, though; this was just a play in a school hall, performed by kids. But it was a fantastic play for all that, brilliantly acted, overwhelmingly effective, and it inspired me to write a novel.

The play was so effective because there was no stage. There were a few seats and benches here and there around the edges of the school hall, but other than that, the audience had to stand or walk about.  At the start of the play we milled around, rather confused at first, like people in a market place, while people in seventeenth century costume tried to sell us things – pies, sweetmeats, mulled wine. But then, suddenly, the actors appeared amongst us.  They were part of the crowd, too, but acting out scenes. Sometimes in front of us, sometimes behind; at other times distant, across the room. As the actors moved, so did we, trying to get a good view, guess what would happen next. It sounds chaotic but it was tremendously effective: the play was all around us, we were in it, part of it, it was happening to US!

And it was a play about what had happened to ordinary people just like us, in that town, 300 years ago. The town was Colyton, in East Devon, and the play was about the Monmouth Rebellion. In 1685, the lives of people in Colyton were transformed – many of them ruined – when James Scott, Duke of Monmouth, landed from a Dutch ship, theHereldenburg, in nearby Lyme Regis.  Who was Monmouth? He was the gallant, proud, dashing, spoilt illegitimate son of King Charles II, who had just died. But Monmouth refused to believe he was illegitimate. Despite his father’s persistent, stubborn denial, Monmouth claimed that King Charles had secretly married his mother, Lucy Walter, long before he married Catherine of Braganza. There were secret letters, Monmouth said, in a casket, which would prove this. And therefore he, James Scott, Duke of Monmouth was the rightful heir to the throne.

Why did this matter, to the ordinary, everyday folk of the town of Colyton? It mattered because the new king, James II – Charles II’s brother and Monmouth’s uncle – was openly Catholic. And that was something that most West Country folk could not abide. Colyton was a small town grown prosperous on the cloth trade, and many of its small merchants and artisans were fiercely Protestant dissenters. Their conventicles were already banned by the Church of England. A Catholic King, they thought, could only make things worse.  Whereas Monmouth, at least, was Protestant – ‘the Protestant Duke.’ He was also young, handsome, and dashing, and had been cheered by crowds everywhere when he had toured the West Country five years before.

So the first bit of news which electrified the crowd in that school hall was that the Duke of Monmouth had landed in Lyme. The gossip spread from mouth to mouth – first whispered, then shouted, then earnestly discussed. What did it mean? Was it true? Did he have soldiers, men, arms?  What should we do? Join his army, welcome him, risk our lives? Or ignore him? What if he failed? What would the punishment be then? How if we did nothing,  and were afraid to help?

It all came vividly alive, in short sketches around the hall. Not two feet in front me, a wife tugged tearfully at her husband, begging him not to go, not to leave her and their children to fight in a futile war, a rebellion which would leave them all ruined, destitute if it failed. And if they lost, how would the King punish them? What would he do? Against which her husband – just a sixth-form boy really, but totally absorbed in his role – spoke of duty, and religion, and his loyalty to the other men of the town, a few of whom had even fought for Cromwell in their youth. How could he desert his friends at this time? In that school hall it seemed so real, so shocking. Such terrible, impossible choices; and of course we all knew, how could we not, that the wife was right, it could only turn out badly in the end.

Monmouth’s men were brave, but badly led. They had their chances, even at Sedgemoor – the last battle to be fought on English soil – but they lost, as we all knew they would. Monmouth was captured and executed, and Judge Jeffreys – surely one of the cruellest, most vindictive men ever to disgrace an English courtroom, was sent by King James to punish the rebels. Jeffreys’ appearance in the school hall was utterly terrifying. He called Colyton ‘the most rebellious town in England.’ Towering above us on a dias which we had not noticed before, wincing and sipping brandy to ease the pain of the stone, he mocked the chained, bloodied prisoners who were dragged limping before him. And because these prisoners came out of the crowd – they were US – his sadistic jokes hit home even harder.

The play didn’t show them being hanged, drawn and quartered, of course – that’s too much – but it brought the horror home to us nonetheless. Staging the play like that brought home the fact that it really happened, to ordinary people like us; if we’d been born earlier, it could have been us.  Of course, not all the men died – some hid, some were transported, some escaped, and the women survived and kept life going. Three years later, King James was gone too, chased away by another, larger army brought to Devon from Holland. And a few surviving rebels crept secretly home, to put their lives together and begin again, as best as they could.

I left that school hall feeling sober, but not sad – it was exhilarating, in a way, to be purged of pity and terror like this, and to see a bunch of school kids and a talented teacher bring English history so dramatically to life. I learned a lot, too. And on the way home, I thought, ‘I should write a book about this.’

So I did.


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13 Responses to Historical Novel Book Fair

  1. Thank you for taking part, Tim.

    Ha, this novel is just up my street. I have an inexplicable affinity with The English Civil Wars, The Interregnum years, The Restoration & The Monmouth Rebellion. Need I say more than I hail from the West Country (Somerset), and am at present in the midst of penning a series set during these periods, two books done and on Amazon, the third almost completed and a fourth to come. Both book 3-4 feature the DoM, and the third novel is dedicated to a descendent of James Duke of Monmouth.

    Interesting how you came to pen the novel post play: the magic of the moment having grabbed you by the throat! Are you by any chance a closet rebel? 😉



    • Tim Vicary says:

      I’m glad it sparked your interest, Francine. It seems we have interests in common! It was indeed a very gripping play; I don’t know if I’m a closet rebel or not, but I certainly felt a lot of sympathy for the poor people involved – in the real rebellion, I mean! My mother was dressed in period costume selling corn dollies while the play went on around us!

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  3. Janet Oakley says:

    A bit of history I have enjoyed reading in the past (I seem stuck in mid-19th or early 20th century right now). Enjoyed reading how this book came about.

    • Tim Vicary says:

      Thanks for your comment, Janet. The interesting thing about the paly was the way it made me think ‘These were real people living ordinary lives just like us, but these terrible things happened to them.’

  4. This is an era I’m pretty fuzzy on — which is why I’m grateful for historical novels like yours — which (guiltily?) are usually my first history lessons about a time/place/era…

    • Tim Vicary says:

      No need to feel guilty. I think that’s an important part of historical fiction – helping people learn about history in an entertaining way. (So long as the story is reasonably accurate, that is)

  5. as always with your posts Tim – very interesting and enjoyable! Tweeted & shared on FB!

  6. Thanks for this, Tim, great to read about some more of the details of this particular episode.

  7. Jeanne_Treat says:

    Interesting post, Tim. I am reading your book now.

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